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Scene Experiment! 
Trying something new with Brightest, and would appreciate feedback. Re-writing the last scene for prose and using art assets already drawn for the scene. 
http://www.brightestcomic.com

Scene Experiment! 

Trying something new with Brightest, and would appreciate feedback. Re-writing the last scene for prose and using art assets already drawn for the scene. 

http://www.brightestcomic.com

Feb 11 2012
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  • #brightest
  • #comic
  • #brightest comic
  • #writing
  • #prose
  1. unicornorgy reblogged this from chuxwagon and added:
    Sorry I didn’t pick up on the intentional redundancy. Herp derp? :/ That line just lept out as a kind of...
  2. chuxwagon reblogged this from unicornorgy and added:
    Thanks for writing something up! It’s interesting that you mention that I had redundant descriptions, because in the...
  3. goodluckcomics said: This probably isn’t possible when using already drawn scenes, but in the future I’d recommend trying to blend the pictures into the background, so they seem less cut and pasty. And I love your art so I suggest moar pics. really well written though :D
  4. neilfein said: The prose version seems a little talky. A lot of the information that was meant to be in drawings will have to be conveyed verbally now. But I can see how this could work.
  5. rainbowsprinklespony said: If you want to tell the story that it could certainly work <3
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